Saturday, May 18, 2013

Interview with Clarissa Johal


BN:  When did you start writing?
CJ:  I started writing when I was young, as most writers do. My family moved around a lot and I was very shy. I was always the new kid. Writing was a way to make a connection where there was none.
 
BN:  What inspired you to write your first book?
CJ:  I’ve had things published throughout my life, short stories, plays, poetry, articles, but it never occurred to me to write an entire book until after the birth of my first child. I had written a short story in one of my mythology classes and decided to build on it one day. While she nursed or slept in my lap, I wrote. It took me a year to write PRADEE, and another ten years to complete it.  After that, I wrote my supernatural novel BETWEEN. It’s just kind of taken off from there. 
 
BN:  Describe a typical writing session or your typical writing area.
CJ:  I write every day while my girls are at school. I drop them off, go to the gym or dance class, take my dogs on a run, and then sit in my favorite chair and write for about six hours. Sometimes, I’ll wake at odd hours and write too. I’m kind of an insomniac.
 
BN:  What inspired the idea for Between?
CJ:  I was working on the second book in my PRADEE fantasy series and was hit with two characters that definitely didn't fit. I kept setting them aside but they wouldn't leave me alone. Eventually, I gave up what I was working on and started writing BETWEEN. I had the rough draft in a month, the finished novel a year later, and it was accepted for publication two months after that.  It just kind of happened, I’ve never written like that before. I’ve been pulled into the Otherworld permanently now. I love writing paranormal and horror and the ideas come faster than I can get them down.

BN:  How did you come up with the title?
CJ:  The title represents the main character’s life and situation. Lucinda sees spirits and is essentially caught between two worlds, the spirit realm and the physical. She’s also caught between two men that come into her life. One seems to want to protect her at all costs, which can be a double-edged sword. The other feels dangerous to her, though she’s drawn to him and can’t figure out why. There are circumstances surrounding the two men where the title applies to them as well—but I won’t ruin that for you!
 
BN:  What was your favorite part about Between and why?
CJ:  I really liked writing the back story of Cronan and Lucas. I wanted to show the readers why they were in the predicament they were in. I did a lot of research into their time period, and without giving anything away, became quite obsessed with it.
 
BN:  Is Between part of a series?  If so, how many books do you plan on being in the series?
CJ:  No. I have too many new ideas to stick with one series! My young adult fantasy PRADEE is the only series I’ve planned. It’s book one in a series of four books. My project on the side…
 
BN:  Which of your characters are your favorite and why?
CJ:  I really like Cronan from my novel BETWEEN. He had so much going on in his back story and was so intense. If I met him in real life, I would probably run away though.
 
BN:  Which is your least favorite?
CJ:  I don’t have one. I like all my characters for different reasons. In fact, I usually end up liking my antagonists better than my protagonists.
 
BN:  What are the books links?
BETWEEN buy links:
 
Okay now that we know a little about your writing life and your books, tell us a little about yourself.

BN:  What do you like to do outside of writing?  Any interesting hobbies?
CJ:  I’ve been taking ballet for over 20 years. I can’t imagine a day without thinking about dance or dancing in general! I also fence, do photography and wildlife rehabilitation when I can. I just started taking a trapeze class too. I’ve always wanted to run away and join the circus.
 
BN:  Do you typically read the same genre you write?
CJ:  I love reading mythology, the classics and anything by Neil Gaiman, BROM, and Charles de Lint. I’ve read everything by Robert Holdstock. I do read some supernatural, but not a lot. I want my ideas to be original.
 
BN:  What is your all time favorite book?
CJ:  That’s a tough question! I can narrow it down to two; Mythago Wood by Robert Holdstock and American Gods by Neil Gaiman.
 
BN:  Tell us something random about you.  (Fan of.....)
CJ:  I love brussel sprouts. Like, seriously love them.
 
BN:  What is the most exciting thing you've ever done?
CJ:  I’ve tried firewalking and didn’t burn myself. That was pretty exciting. Every day is exciting for me because you never know what the day will bring. Aliens could land, a cure for cancer could be found or an airplane ticket could fall into your lap, you just never know.
 
BN:  Describe yourself in five words.
CJ:  Another hard question! Restless, thoughtful, positive, creative and gullible.
 
BN:  Where can readers find out more about you and your books?
Author website:  http://clarissajohal.com/
 
Quick Fun:
-Favorite Food?
Brussel sprouts
 
-Favorite Color?
Apple green
 
-Guilty Pleasure?
Clothes. I love vintage dresses. If I had a ton of money just to spend on clothes, I would get myself into trouble.
 
-Favorite Song?
Hmm, that’s hard. Right now, I like Puscifer, Cruxshadows and some Marilyn Manson, but I don’t think I have one favorite song.
 
-Chocolate or Vanilla?
Lemon
 
-Dessert or Wine?
Not really a fan of either
 
-Tea or Coffee?
Coffee, it used to be Peet’s Sumatra but lately I’ve discovered Gevalia French roast and I’m hooked
 
 
About the Author

Clarissa JohalClarissa Johal has worked as a veterinary assistant, zoo-keeper aide and vegetarian chef. Writing has always been her passion. When she’s not listening to the ghosts in her head, she’s dancing or taking photographs of gargoyles.

Clarissa shares her life with her husband, two daughters and every stray animal that darkens the doorstep. One day, she expects that a wayward troll will wander into her yard, but that hasn’t happened yet.

Publishing Credentials:

BETWEEN, a story of the supernatural.
*Second in the Preditors and Editors Readers Poll 2012
Released by Musa Publishing and available through Amazon.com, BarnesandNoble.com and most on-line retailers.

PRADEE, a fantasy for young adults.
*Second round finalist in Amazon's Breakthrough Novel Award Contest 2012 Available through Amazon.com, BarnesandNoble.com and most on-line retailers.

Short stories:
PIGEONS, published in the literary journal Susurrus
THE ROPE, published in the literary journal Susurrus

Non-Fiction:
A WAY OF LIFE, published in The Sacramento Bee 
 
 

Friday, May 17, 2013

Review: Between by Clarissa Johal

Between


Synopsis:
 How far would you go to redeem yourself?

As a young girl, Lucinda was able to see spirits, a gift that didn’t come without its problems. Now, a dedicated young veterinarian, she is committed to the idea that every life can be saved.

After a devastating accident, Lucinda tries to escape her past by moving to a small town. There, she meets a newcomer and feels an immediate connection with him. But there is another mysterious stranger to the small town, one that stirs within her a mixture of unease and desire.

As Lucinda is drawn into a bitter tug-a-war from the forces around her, she is likewise pulled into a dangerous twist of past and present events. Forced to make difficult choices, she finds that the two men are locked in not only a battle for her life…but a battle for their salvation.


My Thoughts

Lucinda finds herself needing a change after a tragedy and moves to a quaint small town to start over.   But Lucinda isn't just your normal everyday vet, she can see spirits, and not just human spirits, she can see animal spirits as well.  I found this point very intriguing.  Not too many authors have delved into the idea of animal spirits.  Bravo to the author for this idea, the writing style, and great characters.  

Between has a great plot, fast-paced, and has so much to offer.  

My only problem was getting into the book.  The beginning was a little rocky and I was confused at first.  Not too far into the book, I got hooked and was turning the pages waiting to see what happened next.  

Clarissa Johal does a wonderful job with her distinct characters, ideas, story flow, and keeping readers engaged.  Animal lovers will definitely enjoy this book!

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About the Author

Clarissa JohalClarissa Johal has worked as a veterinary assistant, zoo-keeper aide and vegetarian chef. Writing has always been her passion. When she’s not listening to the ghosts in her head, she’s dancing or taking photographs of gargoyles.

Clarissa shares her life with her husband, two daughters and every stray animal that darkens the doorstep. One day, she expects that a wayward troll will wander into her yard, but that hasn’t happened yet.

Publishing Credentials:

BETWEEN, a story of the supernatural.
*Second in the Preditors and Editors Readers Poll 2012
Released by Musa Publishing and available through Amazon.com, BarnesandNoble.com and most on-line retailers.

PRADEE, a fantasy for young adults.
*Second round finalist in Amazon's Breakthrough Novel Award Contest 2012 Available through Amazon.com, BarnesandNoble.com and most on-line retailers.

Short stories:
PIGEONS, published in the literary journal Susurrus
THE ROPE, published in the literary journal Susurrus

Non-Fiction:
A WAY OF LIFE, published in The Sacramento Bee 

Don't miss my interview with Clarissa Johal, which will be live May 17th. 


 

Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Cover Reveal: New Beginning by N.L. Echeverria

Photo: *****COVER REVEAL*****

"New Beginning" Book Two in Fallen Desire Series ~ Release June 15th, 2013
THANK YOU Steph's Cover Designs
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If saving him means I’ll lose him, I’ll do it.  A part of me will die if I lose Ethan and to watch him withering away is already killing me.  He deserves redemption and I can’t be selfish only because I don’t know what will become of him once he’s free. No matter what happens though I’ll never give up on him.  Once I’ve redeemed Ethan, if it’s my destiny, I’ll spend a lifetime looking for him.  Ethan’s my life and the reason all of this began; the last thing I’ll do is give up.  

Saving the demons is a part of me now.  I can’t deny the desire I have to free them.  I’ll stop at nothing until I’ve saved all who are worthy and I’ll kill all those who get in my way.  Patience I no longer have and if anyone threatens my friends they’ll be the first to die at my hands.  I will fight to protect the one’s I love and free the ones who are suffering.

I’ve built so many friendships and to know that they’ll all stand and fight by my side gives me reassurance that we may come out of this after all.  I’ve embraced my powers, and the destiny of the Fallen and mankind lie in my hands.  I’m the redeemer and this is my new beginning. 

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"For he is my demon, and I am his redeemer" 

“New Beginning” is filled with newfound enemies, friendships and loves. 

With a renewed outlook on who she is, Lindsay's desperation to save Ethan intensifies as he grows weaker by the day. Saving him becomes her sole mission and she will face anyone who stands in her way.  Now with Derrick as her Guardian Angel, Lindsay and her friends seek out answers through the book of "The Redeemer". 

When Lindsay's faced by Laurence, a demon who wants her dead, the true power of her abilities are tested. She soon finds many who are loyal to her, including Yolanda, the head of the Fallen Council and lover to Laurence. Lindsay quickly discovers that her urge to seek demons and save them becomes a part of her and something she can’t deny.   

A longtime friendship between Derrick and Kim blooms into something much deeper as Kim has waited for this moment for so long. Discover if Derrick’s never-ending love for Lindsay will stand in their way. 

Secrets lie behind the unexpected as a love causes betrayal. Follow Lindsay as she finds new friendships and becomes the leader she never thought she would be. When she’s faced with the true evil of a demon her determination to save Ethan guides her.
 
"New Beginning" Book Two in Fallen Desire Series ~ Release June 15th, 2013
THANK YOU Steph's Cover Designs
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If saving him means I’ll lose him, I’ll do it. A part of me will die if I lose Ethan and to watch him withering away is already killing me. He deserves redemption and I can’t be selfish only because I don’t know what will become of him once he’s free. No matter what happens though I’ll never give up on him. Once I’ve redeemed Ethan, if it’s my destiny, I’ll spend a lifetime looking for him. Ethan’s my life and the reason all of this began; the last thing I’ll do is give up.

Saving the demons is a part of me now. I can’t deny the desire I have to free them. I’ll stop at nothing until I’ve saved all who are worthy and I’ll kill all those who get in my way. Patience I no longer have and if anyone threatens my friends they’ll be the first to die at my hands. I will fight to protect the one’s I love and free the ones who are suffering.

I’ve built so many friendships and to know that they’ll all stand and fight by my side gives me reassurance that we may come out of this after all. I’ve embraced my powers, and the destiny of the Fallen and mankind lie in my hands. I’m the redeemer and this is my new beginning.

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"For he is my demon, and I am his redeemer"

“New Beginning” is filled with newfound enemies, friendships and loves.

With a renewed outlook on who she is, Lindsay's desperation to save Ethan intensifies as he grows weaker by the day. Saving him becomes her sole mission and she will face anyone who stands in her way. Now with Derrick as her Guardian Angel, Lindsay and her friends seek out answers through the book of "The Redeemer".

When Lindsay's faced by Laurence, a demon who wants her dead, the true power of her abilities are tested. She soon finds many who are loyal to her, including Yolanda, the head of the Fallen Council and lover to Laurence. Lindsay quickly discovers that her urge to seek demons and save them becomes a part of her and something she can’t deny.

A longtime friendship between Derrick and Kim blooms into something much deeper as Kim has waited for this moment for so long. Discover if Derrick’s never-ending love for Lindsay will stand in their way.

Secrets lie behind the unexpected as a love causes betrayal. Follow Lindsay as she finds new friendships and becomes the leader she never thought she would be. When she’s faced with the true evil of a demon her determination to save Ethan guides her.
 
 
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Monday, May 13, 2013

Short Story Monday: Haunted Truth (Part 4)

This weeks short story is a continuation of Haunted Truth that was published on this blog three weeks ago.  If you missed Part 1-3, follow the following links to get caught up! 
 
 
Haunted Truth (Part 4)
“Immie,” Ray pulls on my arm, frantically urging me back.  “Immie, we have to go.” 
Macon’s eyes gleam through the darkness of the basement, his red eyes bright.  I can hear Ray distantly as he continues to pull on my arm, but all that starts to fade as sweet music fills my head, drawing me toward Macon.  I can feel Ray’s grasp tighten on me as I move forward, pulling against his restraint.  I fight Ray, wanting to get closer to Macon, closer to the blissful music. 
Arms circle around me, tightening around my arms and chest.  I feel my body fight against those arms, not wanting to be pulled away from the peace I feel.  Macon’s eyes narrow into slits, his focus still on me.  Words start to mingle with beautiful hum.  Freedom.  Fight.  Completeness.  Come to me. 
I kick my legs back as hard as I can, shoving Ray back.  His grasp doesn’t loosen, it only tightens as we land together on the ground.  I keep kicking, flaunching from side to side, but Ray keeps his hold.  In a desperate attempt, Ray rolls me to the side, covering my body with his. 
“Immie, stop!  Don’t listen, he’s trying to take you.  Think of Pete, remember him.  This is how he got to Pete, Immie.  You have to be strong, fight him!  Fight him for Pete.”  Ray’s voice is strong, overpowering the music as I focus on him.  His voice is desperate, pleading.  “Please Immie, fight him for me.  I need you.   I need your help.”  My body relaxes, the fight leaving me.  His voice softens as he brushes the hair from my face.  “I need you in my life, Immie.  You’re the only person who understands, who knows what really happened.  You’re the only one that can help me get past the pain, the nightmares.  You’re the only one I have to talk to.”  Ray shudders, rolling off me, tears breaming in his eyes. 
I never once considered what he might be dealing with after what happened.  All I was focused on was revenge for Pete.  But what about Ray?  After seeing what I just saw and experienced, I know there is nothing Ray could have done to save Pete.  I was selfish and never once asked Ray if he was okay.  Never considered his pain once he faced Macon, the person that took our friend and probably haunts his dreams as they do mine. 
I reach over, grabbing Ray’s hand.  “I’m sorry.”  I know it’s not much to offer, but my mind is still muddled, my shame high.  One thing I seem to be good at, selfishness.  I was selfish after my father died, then again after Pete’s death.  My mother, my sister, all my friends, they all suffered because of my self-pity.  But what about their pain? 
I had vowed to myself in the quiet street as I walked out my frustrations that I would not be selfish anymore.  That I would be the person I used to be.  I wouldn’t let others suffer, bringing them more pain, because of me and my refusal to move on.  That determination crashed when I met Macon.  Now, here I was, being selfish and asking Ray to face the demon that almost took his life but that was successful with his best friend.  When I met with him at his apartment, I should have asked him if he could handle this but I didn’t.  Instead, I asked for his help and when he agreed, off we went. 
I stand, pulling him with me and look around the yard before turning back to the house.  Ray keeps his back to the house, unwilling to look in the direction of where his nightmares hide.  “I really am sorry.  I shouldn’t have asked you to help me.” 
Ray jerks as if I slapped him.  “I’m not a baby, Immie.  I can handle this.  I need to know why they did this.”  His shoulders slump, his voice low.  “I just need to know that I have you after this is all over.  We all need someone, Immie, and you’re the one I need now.  You have no idea how much it means to me to know that I have someone to talk to now.  I’ve felt alone and stupid for so long and—”
“This is nice and all, but we have to go.”  I start backing away from the house, grabbing Ray’s arm as I do.  While I had been listening to Ray express his relief, I had been watching the house as well.  It was easy to forget the threat that we were still in danger while standing in this beautiful landscape, surrounded by flowers and the peace of the rural area.  But we were still in danger, our feelings of gratitude needing to stay on the back burner.  When I looked up to the second story windows, there was that immediate reminder of the danger as Derek looked down at us with dismay and anger.  He had flipped the curtain closed, no doubt coming downstairs to confront us.  “Run.” I yell and turn for the wood line. 
But when I do, I stop, stumbling over my own feet in my shocked haste, and falling to my knees.  Derek is standing at the edge of the lawn where it meets the wood line, a gun in his hand.  How did he get there?  He was just in the house.  Ray is quick to pull me to my feet before stepping in front of me, shielding my body with his.
“It’s not nice to snoop around people’s property.”  Derek says, walking slowly toward us. 
“What do we do?”  I whisper behind Ray. 
“I don’t know.”  Ray mumbles, his body stiff. 
Derek pulls up his gun, pointing at us.  I want to scream, to plead with him to let us go, but I know better.  He’s hiding something, something he wants no one to know about.  So why would he let us go?  Oh that’s right, he won’t.  From the looks of it, we are fixing to be his next victim. 
“Back in the house.”  Derek says, gesturing with his gun. 
Ray slowly starts backing up, unwilling to step out from in front of me or turn his back on Derek.  We stumble across the lawn, terrified, until we reach the steps.  Derek keeps gesturing for us to go, but I’m unwilling.  If he’s just going to kill us, then he needs to get on with it.  I don’t want to be Macon’s next victim. 
I step out from behind Ray, who instantly tries to shield me again, but I shove him aside.  “What do you want?”
Derek smiles a vicious smiles, gun still raised.  “You’re a brave girl, just like your mom.  Too bad, I was hoping to get to know your family more, offer you the same opportunity as was offered me.  Looks like my plans have changed though, no thanks to your prying.”  He steps closer, his eyes narrowing.  “Get in the house,” he demands, his voice deep with anger. 
I go to protest but Ray pulls me back, stepping up on the first step.  “Just go with it, Immie.”  Just go with it?  How do you just go with someone wanting to kill you? 
I look at Ray in disbelief, but when he sternly looks at me, I give in, hoping he has a plan. 
We walk through the nice, quaint home Derek has made for himself still stumbling backwards.  I keep glancing back to ensure that Macon isn’t waiting inside for us as Derek pushes us deeper inside.  “Down to the basement.” 
What?  Uh, no.  Again I start to protest but Ray stops me with a squeeze to my hand.  I look at him, narrowing my eyes with a ‘you better have a good freaking plan buddy’ look before taking that first shaky step down into the basement.  My backs to Derek now, against my will, unable to walk down the stairs backwards. 
Once at the bottom, I freeze, contemplating my options.  Death by weird red-eyed dude who can fill my mind with blissful music as he tears me apart, or a quick gunshot wound?  Either way really sucks.  I step to the side, allowing Ray to step up beside me as Derek descends down the stairs, his eyes never leaving us. 
The damp, dark room is heavy with the smell of rot and mold.  Water drips from a pipe overhead, a big puddle on the floor.  I guess Derek isn’t very handy when it comes to plumbing. 
Macon growls from the corner, his red eyes bright in the darkened room.  I gasp, taking a step back out of fear.  When is the music going to start?  I would rather hurry up and get this over with. 
Derek sits in a chair by Macon, gun still pointed at us as he makes himself comfortable.  “I’m sure your first question will be to ask what Macon is?”
Ray chuckles, his shoulders tight.  “Actually, I’m more curious to know why he’s hiding behind a deranged, little pansy like you.”
I smile at Derek’s surprised face.  He obviously didn’t expect mockery from his hostages.  “Excuse me?”
Ray’s muscles are still tight, but his voice is calm and cool.  “Well look at him versus you.  He’s obviously something else entirely from us humans and probably more than able to tear us mere mortals apart, yet here he is chained to a wall while you hold a gun.  What’s that all about?”  Ray directs the question to Macon who snarls in return. 
Derek, who is non to happy, tightens his free hand into a fist.  “You know nothing about me, boy.  I could tear you apart just as easily as Macon here.”  Macon scoffs, obviously unimpressed by Derek’s show of macho.  Derek ignores him, continuing his banter.  “But to answer your question, I first need to explain who Macon is and what kind of leverage I have over him.” 
I look to Ray, worried.  What the crap have we gotten ourselves into?
“You see, Derek’s mother is, or rather was, a succubus.  On a rare occasion, and I mean very rare, a succubus falls in love with a human.  His poor mother was one of those poor saps that fell for the trap of love.  An even rarer treat is a succubus who gives birth and when she does, she usually births a girl.”  Births a girl, who talks like that?  “But Macon’s mother did not, as you can see.  She birthed a boy.  This is very unordinary.  I think throughout all of history there has only been four boys born to a succubus.  They are called Shispers.” 
Shispers?  What kind of name is that?  With a creature as rare as Macon, I would think they could come up with something better, something with a nice, threatening ring to it. 
“Shispers have the same abilities as their mothers, but are weaker because of the human blood that taints them.”   Derek smiles an awful smile, shifting in his seat with obvious pleasure.  “I was lucky enough to be the father of this great gift.” 
The room falls into a deep silence, the only sound coming from the water that drips from the pipes.  So Derek is Mason’s human father?  “How could you do this to your own son?”  I ask.
“Let me finish my story, Immie.”  Derek says with impatience.  “You see, I was once a demon hunter.  There are a lot of us out there you know.  I had been chasing Mea all over the southern US, when I finally happened upon her in Louisiana.  She was basking in the moon, watching for her next prey on the streets below when I jumped her on the rooftops of New Orleans.  She was shocked at first, as they usually are, but was quick to try her charms on me.  They didn’t work of course, not with my hunters mark.”  Derek pulls up his sleeve, revealing a tattoo on his shoulder of a crescent moon with seven small stars in a line from its tip, a sphere runs diagonal through the center with an inscription underneath that I’m unable to read. 
“Mea, knowing she was in trouble, ran.  We had our bit of fun, playing cat and mouse.”  Derek has a fond smile as he thinks back to the days of his time with Mea.  “I captured her after two days of chasing in New Orleans.  There was something more to Mea that appealed to my soul.  Call me a weak man, but I fell for her beauty.  After several years of hiding, Mea told me she was pregnant and that her pregnancy would kill her.  She made me vow to protect our child.  She didn’t want our child to be a part of the life her mother had given her.  I promised her I would, but when Macon was born, I didn’t know how to do that.  After years of research, I found that if he consumed thirteen souls he would become more powerful than that of a full blooded succubus.  With my help, he consumed the life’s he needed and ascended before my own eyes.  His body rising in darkness, his soul consumed with power.” 
Remorse is evident on Derek’s face as he regards his son.  “But I did not do all the proper research.  I had only found what I wanted and left the rest behind me.  But once Macon started craving the need of a soul every day, I went back to the place I had found my information before, the hunter’s relics.  It’s a place only a hunter can enter.  It’s full of ancient artifacts of demons, their offspring’s, weapons, and more.  There I found the rest of the information I needed.  In trying to save Macon, I had inevitably created the fiercest of demons.” 
Macon begins to growl, pulling against the chains, trying to get free.  Where the chains touch his skin it burns black.  “You will not save me father.  I am beyond saving.  Let me free.”  Macon spits. 
Derek just looks at him with a sad smile.  “Must we go through this every time we talk son.  You know I cannot do so.”  He turns his sad eyes from his son and back to us.  “I found that if I tied myself to my son spiritually under a blood moon, I could have some control over him.  The problem, I would slowly kill myself in the process unless he consumed a young soul to keep us alive.  I did what any father would do and chose to save my son.  Against my training and beliefs, I bound our souls with the help of a Seer.  We have roamed this earth, together, for nearly eighty years, never aging.  You see my tattoo.  It used to be made of gold, now it is silver.  In a few more years it will be completely black, burned by the demon blood running through my veins.”
Growing impatient, although I must say this is an interesting story, I step forward.  “What does any of this have to do with us?”  I ask. 
Derek rises from his seat, his gun lowered now.  “I had no intentions of ever hurting you, Immie, or your mother for that matter.  I simply needed the love of a woman to consume me again, like it did with my Mea.”
“Why?” I ask with astonishment.
“If love consumed me, it would consume my son.  My love is not enough.  I need the power of love, true love.  I never intended for you or your family to know of Macon until he was tamed.  Once the feel of love is wrapped around his darkened spirit, I can weaken him, shatter his power back to its original state.  After all, love is the strongest of emotions.  It can consume a person’s life so much it is hard to breathe at times.  I need that break through with him.” 
“That sounds too simple.”  Ray says, his disbelief mirroring mine.
“You are smart.”  Derek paces in front of us, his steps calculating.  “It is true that this is not all I must have.  I must also have another thirteen souls.  Your friend, Pete was it?  Your mother told me of your loss.  I had no intentions of taking someone close to your family, Immie.  He was a convenience, I’m afraid.  I have been watching your mother for a few years now.  I’ve seen her loss, love, and kind spirit.  The exact beautiful woman that I need to save my son.  The souls that I have taken have also been pure, which is also what I need to save my son, pure souls.  When I release their souls from the in-between where they are trapped, they will swarm Macon with their love and goodness.  With that and the love I feel for your mother, I am sure he can be restored to a lesser version of himself.”  Derek stops abruptly, facing us directly, closer than I would like. 
“I only need two more souls and the love of your mother.  I will gain her love and trust as we scour the area, looking for you and your friend here, Immie.  Never did I want to hurt your mother, but I must do what I have to do to save my son.” 
My chest starts to ache with fear as my heart begins to beat with a terrifying force.  “You do not love my mother, you are obsessed.  If you loved her, you would not do this.  Your son will never feel true love from you, not when it's forced.” 
Derek smiles, picking up on my fear as I scowl at him.  “I’m not going to kill you yet, Immie.  I don’t need your soul now, it is too soon.  I have to wait until your mother truly loves me.  Until then, you will remain here with Macon.”
Macon lashes out again against the chains.  His voice deep with menace.  “He’s lying.  He’s only using me to sustain his life.  As long as I live, he lives.  Why else would he chain me?” 
Derek doesn’t glance back at Macon, but he does chuckle.  “You must not listen.  He will say anything to get free.” 
Macon looks at me, his anger gone as he pleads with me.  “Think about it, Immie.  He said it himself, he can control me.  He has tied his will to mine.  When I consume a life, part of that life goes to him, sustaining his life so he can live forever.  That is what so many mortals want is it not?  To live without fear of dying?  As long as he has me chained, he does not have to use his influence on me to control me.  He only lets me free to consume a life to prolong his own.” 
Derek laughs again, turning now to his son.  “You make up some of the greatest of stories.  You have talent my son, true talent, just like your mother.” 
Macon ignores his father, keeping his gaze on me.  “If you me, you kill him.  Kill me Immie.  Save your mother.  He will do nothing but destroy her.” 
My breath catches, my chest so tight I can barely breathe.  I look to Ray in a panic.  I’m startled to see him calm and cool, untouched with fear.  I hear Derek laugh again, but I ignore him and focus on Ray.  There is a steadiness to him that is comforting, although confusing. 
In a quick move I don’t expect, Ray pulls me behind him.  In his other hand he holds a gun.  I have just enough time to think, where did he get a gun, before a shot is fired.  I cover my ears, closing my eyes.  Even with my ears covered, I hear Derek yell out.  I jerk up in time to see him fall to his knees, dropping his gun.  I look to Macon to see a bullet hole in his chest, right where a heart should be. 
I stumble back in shock, my breathing fast, my vision swarming.  Ray catches a hold of me to keep me from stumbling further away from the stairs that lead to freedom.  Just as I’m about to bolt, Derek gasps.  “You…fool.”  Blood seeps out of his mouth as he tries spitting out more words.  His body goes slump on the floor, blood pouring from his chest.
I look to Ray, wide-eyed.  “Which one did you shoot?”
“Macon,” he says with disbelief as he looks down at Derek. 
He grabs my hand, ready to bolt it up the stairs.  But before we even make it to the first step, the basement door at the top slams, the door lock slamming home.  A shiver runs through me as laughter fills the now pitch black room. 
“Ready to play?”  Macon’s taunting voice fills the dark space, his laughter growing louder.  I reach out grabbing Ray’s hand as the sound of chains breaking echoes through the room.     
 
 
 
 
Stay tuned...next Monday, Haunted Truth (Finale). 
 
 If you know of someone that writes poetry or short stories and they are not published but post to a blog, send them my way.  I'll be happy to throw in some special guests here and there.

*Please note that all short stories posted have not been professional edited.
 
 
 


Saturday, May 11, 2013

Review: Mercy's Debt (Montgomery's Vampires, Book 1)

Mercy's Debt (Montgomery's Vampires Series Book One)
 
 
Synopsis
 
After graduating from the prestigious Dewhurst University, Mercy Montgomery finds herself in a bit of financial trouble: over $108,000 worth of financial trouble, in fact. She can’t find a job to save her life, and with bill collectors constantly at her heels, she has no idea how she will ever come up with the money needed in order to keep her head above water.

Mercy’s monetary worries seem to be over after a chance meeting with mystifyingly pale Michael Graves, who offers her a high-paying job at his company, Dignitary. But there’s a catch; the seemingly harmless Dignitary is an underground organization that offers human chaperones to wealthy bloodsucking clients.

As if congregating with the undead doesn’t make life complicated enough for Mercy, there’s a savage killer on the loose who appears to have a craving for her blood. Soon Mercy is torn between a dark and dangerous underworld of supernatural desire and a simple life of practicality, and sexy but dangerous business magnate Robert Bramson is the man she blames for her confusion. As the killer closes in, Mercy realizes that she must make a decision. But will she make her choice too late?
 
 
My Thoughts
 
 
Mercy's Debt was a good, interesting read, but I had trouble with some of the scenes as far as story depth, and also with the books conclusion.  Don't get me wrong, the book is good but it just isn't great.
 
Mercy is a college grad and Sloan does a great job of depicting the life of a college student and the life they face after graduation.  She does a good job of incorporating real life that becomes a terrifying, unreal one when she meets Michael and his wife.  They offer her a high paying job at Dignitary.  Of course, Mercy is skeptical at first but with the temptation of getting out of debt, she checks it out. 
 
Then enters Robert.  I really liked Robert.  He's a closed off Vampire, that is until he meets Mercy.  The silent, lonely, CEO of Dignitary opens up to Mercy and reveals a lot about himself. 
 
There's the threat of a murderer, sex, fear, interests, and action in the book, but like I said it does have its problem area.  There were scenes that didn't serve a purpose for the actual story, other scenes that were choppy and needed more build up. 
 
But the conclusion, my lord, I had to keep my angry flares at bay to keep from giving this book a one star.  This book has good buildup, an in depth look at the characters, a great (although sometimes cliché) storyline, BUT what happened to the conclusion?  I felt like I was in the middle of a scene that was going to lead to a clue or revelation, eagerly turning the page I read THE END.  What??  I understand a cliffhanger, I would have been fine with a cliffhanger, at least then I would have gotten some ending.  Instead, the ending seemed rushed and then just abruptly stopped.
 
Overall, I think Mercy's Debt was good, even with some quirks, and I'm curious to know where the story is going. 
 
 
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About the Author
 
Sloan ArcherSloan Archer resides in California. She has been penning fiction since childhood; her first books were horror mysteries inspired by the howling coyotes on her family's farm.

She is a seasoned world traveler whose journeys have taken her from Madagascar to Indonesia, and many countries in-between. In 2007, she founded a jewelry label, VIVI+VIVI, and received international recognition for her creations, her most coveted designs worn by celebrities and carried in Fred Segal. In 2012, she closed her business to focus on her true love, writing.

When Sloan isn't composing books, she enjoys traveling, running marathons, painting, reading, and spending time at the beach. She is currently working on two novels: "Mercy's Doubt," the second installation of the Montgomery's Vampires Series, and "Lilac Coma."